Review Detail of novelmeister in I, the All-Class Magus, All My Awakening Skills are LvMax

Pacing is great on this story but there are more than a few inconsistencies that made me quit reading the story, despite having the funds to purchase additional chapters. The main inconsistency was John’s purpose to conceal his talent, becoming the top awakened in his age group secretly, but ends up blatantly revealing himself and all of his skills and potential to Seraphina, because he says “I like to hunt with women.” Moreover, this fact is proven that he solely did this because she is a woman when he hastily agrees to share his exp, further shortening the gap between him and her for a measly 5 million coins every day. This doesn’t make sense considering he earned over 30 million coins through one hunting session. The other example is when he chooses to hunt with the group in the secret realm and reveals his power to everyone around him - none of this screams “genius awakened player “ or “alpha,” just a man that succumbed to pity desires and couldn’t keep his power hidden. Realistically, John would be dead the moment seraphina knew of his power, because she would tell her father or use her connections to eliminate him as a potential threat. That’s just how the real world works.