Review Detail of CloverNine in The Editor's POV

Hi! Shameless author is here! Editor's POV is a fantasy novel set on a main character forcedfully get transmigrated to a body of the villain. As the story progress, he'll slowly adapt what it means to be a villain and the responsibility it carries. In any case, I will give you a heads up for the story to avoid confusion as you read. First, the narration, I have finally realized the problem but only past 40 chapters, so bear with me. I did not know that first pov could be so complicated as it was obvious on my first 40 chapters. Regardless, I've always been looking for a way to improve, and your feedback offers me so many insights. Second, the main character, there is two main character here in a sense, the emotionless Luke (what is seen in the surface) and the talkative and overactive Eddy who is talking in the first pov. You might think that Luke was showing emotion but it was mainly just Eddy feeling it, and it was only based on his mind. Furthermore, Deceptive Traits also forcedfully showed Luke an emotion which always conflicts the emotionless traits. Convuluted, isn't it? Third, asking if it is a harem or not. This is not a harem, mind you. But, of course, I'll introduce some female sub-characters for you all to enjoy, lol! Nevertheless, if you based the text on the author, it just shows that the author prefer one than two or many, XD Fourth, ah, it is only now I realized that actual story would actually begin on the second volume (You know, where the true main character finally appears.) This is only me trying to establish everything: world building, power levels, main character, system, etc. I guess, that was it? If you have any more questions, just drop it on the comments, Thank you! And have fun reading!