For once, I want to be loved. Not by luck, but by someone who loved us. Not by their idealization but the fabrication of my very being without even changing myself.
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As I'm about to reach 100 chapters, I think it is best to leave a review now. Writing Quality: I leave it 5 since, although alterations slowly appeared, I am consistent on the quality, from complex to simple, as I'm also experimenting and learning along the way. If you dislike something, do let me know! Stability of Updates: It's undeniable that the first month's updates sucks, but after I got into premium, I have been consistent in updating 2 chapters per day. Although I wonder how will I be able to remain consistent while studying in a state university, but, hey, I'm trying my best! Story Development: A shameless five stars. Firstly, my foreshadowing and my not outlined plan in my head has been consistently written with some alterations, of course. Secondly, although I have yet to end the volume 1, I am confident that the development will lead to what I have envisioned as I was meticulously setting those flags. Lastly and most importantly, the story development are deeply aligned to the characters and world background without straining each other. Character Design: Another shameless five stars. From Qwanisha to others, they have a very dinstict character aspects, that even I, the author, felt like I was not writing what they are supposed to say, but narrating what they are saying. Comically, even I found my side characters unpredictable--of course, except my main character since we can easily familiriaze how he reacts. As the MC and his beasts are the limelight, I am trying my best to design a likeable different characters of his beasts. World Background: Another shameless 5 stars. I introduced races and was trying my best to put emphasize to them--faeries, luminaries, something you weren't familiar with. These races are relevant on their relationship with the humans, especially the main character and side characters. Of course, we should talk about the Tower--It is an existence that challenges the invited players to ascend each floor. I am currently focused in The Trial, as it covers two volume--Volume 1: Hellish Trial, Volume 2: Heart of the Burg. However, the Trial already emanated the challenges of each floor should be, resulting on taking some time to formulate it to the best of my abilities. In addition, the world building has a heavy emphasis on this story, as the world not only revolve around the Tower but the Earth, i.e. its current state, technology, etc. FAQ 1: Will there be romance author? As of now, I haven't decided on the female lead yet, so it might happen on Volume 3. FAQ 2: Harem? Sadly, no. I'm not into an idea of being in a relationship with more than one. FAQ 3: Is MC an idiot? Hmm, if you are used to being alone and have faced the harshness of the reality, you will have a different values and vision. He might commit some mistakes, but he'll continue to learn. FAQ 4: Aren't you shameless for giving your first review and rated it as 5 stars? I am, no doubt, an author who disliked his stories, but this one... I like it. Since I am the first to give a review, why won't I be biased? XD Now read it and let me know your thoughts!
I've checked, confirmed, and corrected it. thank you for letting me know
Can't help it, I want you all to be updated, for later in the story, there will be barely any status shown in the chapters
Was it her, though?
To be honest, I was shell-shocked too when I read it was immunity instead of resistance. Since you've raised it, I'll change it. Thank you for reminding me
Well, ask her. I, the author, sometimes can't grasp Faith's mind hahahaha
I'll take note of that
H2O is a consistent writer with vast experience in writing webnovels. Give it a try and you won't regret it. It's harem and ecchi already! [img=update]
Yeah, thanks. But more like, its literary aspects since it's my major related