Review Detail of Whoami_ in Depth of Sanity

Greetings readers, this is the first time I'm writing a novel. My lack of experience is noticeable. Therefore, I'm in deep appreciation if someone generously leaves a few words to note me for the mistakes I've made especially in my grammar and writing qualities. Therefore the energy I might receive from the comment will help me stay awake and keep the entertainment with a satisfying update stability. Have a great day:)