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The story was indeed a bit confusing, but it's easy to submerge into it. However, I see the author wants to make a great character development in the main character. Therefore, the main character was decent due to how easy it was to fall into a depression. Yet, it was a good start. I am not sure that I can tell this, I am a new writer, but I would like to suggest an author to do some minor editing. Also, the author has a case of telling rather than showing. Overall was great, the writing quality is pretty good. Pls update more🙏
Greetings readers, this is the first time I'm writing a novel. My lack of experience is noticeable. Therefore, I'm in deep appreciation if someone generously leaves a few words to note me for the mistakes I've made especially in my grammar and writing qualities. Therefore the energy I might receive from the comment will help me stay awake and keep the entertainment with a satisfying update stability. Have a great day:)
The World-building is decent...I got confused at first but slowly got into it...reading this at a slow pace is recommended for a deeper understanding of the characters...However, author... should try to put a title for every chapter. This will help your readers to understand the main point of that chapter👍. Good job and have a good day.