The fic feels rushed. A lot of details are missing. There is barely any conversation. There were mentions of chatgpt in comments and I do believe it might be true because the whole experience felt robotic.

no creativity, characters are pretty much dead, too short, almost no conversations = AI content (Chat GPT). use your own effort to make a story, those AI cannot help you make even half decent story, why go the easy and unrewarding way? wreck your brain for ideas, write them down and try stitch them to make a proper plot and start writing from there. decide how your character look and he's personality, try using your own effort, you may fail once, twice,... but you will learn and improve, eventually you will be able to write something that can satisfy YOU, don't try to satisfy others, write what YOU like.

Say hello to the one who...""Hello!!""Are we going to review this?""Yes, we are!!""Can we just give it 5-star and left?""No!!""But we just did...""Hahahaha!!""

Rubbish ChatGPT word vomit..would advise to save your time and skip!

Hey i am rating it 5 star now its your turn to review my fanfic and be sure to give it 5 star as well (btw love your fic keep it up)😁😁

Love the story so far ☕🗿Writing quality is solid and the story itself isn't too original but Kai's character is alright but i'd love some more character developement goingEither way....

everything is meh till the later that's when it really gets good

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