OK, since I don’t have that much time myself, this is a bit of a premature judgment. First, your take on fantasy is rather refreshing, just like another review said. I could feel it when I started reading Second, while your writing is rather easy to read, there are minor mistakes I can see including not separating sentences to make it a bit smoother. That’s all from me rn. I hope to see more!
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