YuR006

Thanks for dropping by.

Yeah, I’ve been quite busy lately since it’s end of a term.

Author here, If you are interested in checking out this mediocre (probably not even that) book and haven’t read the description, here are a few things to note so you don’t waste your time here: + No solid schedule (I try my best to write but it’s more like a temporary hobby and it can get quite busy in my personal life) + Bad pacings and plots holes can be attributed to the above as well as my lacking writing ability + It can get quite confusing at times + This is a rewrite, but it’s much different from its previous version now + Author’s note is just some personal thoughts on top of my head at that time, so skipping that is fine. + Not a proficient English user If you do have questions after reading (and criticisms) you can comment below this post and I’ll answer to the best of my abilities.

Didn’t expect a reply this late. In my opinion, I believe it’s precisely that it’s incomplete which makes it basically an open-ended question with countless possibilities as an answer. Since it’s open to endless interpretation, I think it’s only fair that the answer can be chosen according to his favor, and the add-on sentence about asking when they were going probably popped into his head right then, which itself would count as the truth. That said, since I haven’t read too much past the free chapters, I can’t say I grasp the nuances of his flaws, and am only able to present to you whatever my thoughts were on the reply Sunny gave here.

Without biases ofc

Ya know what holds equity? Randomness! Just do random rollcalls lol

Hmm…I guess it did get rather confusing. To summarise with the information at hand, Fier (a demon with a previous demon king’s authority) entered Jun’s world*, got info dumped by a boy, and then was subsequently sent away. Right after that, a priestess intruded into his world and revealed some stuff to him, making him excited and stuff. I also partly revealed a mentioned character, and that’s basically my current stopping point. Well, I don’t know if you read the whole thing or skipped some but I’m glad you at least gave this a chance. Thx for reading. In any case, Imma head out so have a nice day.

I think italics with “ “ would work ngl

I love the amount of detail you put into this story to make it seem alive and easier to imagine. Although there’s some repetitive use of terms in the early chapter, it is but a minor concern to any readers that make their way through this book. The plot is decent and the writing is good, but it still remains to be seen if this will be the same for the future onward (with the amount of chapter at the point I’m reviewing). I have no comment on the yandere niche. As long as you capitalize on it well, I’m sure many niche readers will come your way I wish you good luck on this journey, Author Odayaka.

Ah, sure. Glad to know you’re still around