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It started with action right from the first paragraph. I mean, sure, it has some interesting ideas behind it and it has potential too. Only that it is being held back by capitalization, and grammar mistakes though nothing a good editing can't fix. Good luck, author!

The Novel's Villainics.

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thanks.