Review Detail of DARDAR10923 in Death befallen

**I gave 5 stars to motivate the author.** The story has a nice idea behind it. Kinda dark with a messed up tradition and stuff. And if you like multiple POV's and long chapters, this might be for you. I would say this story has a potential but it is being held back by grammar and misuse/lack of punctuation but there is nothing a good editing can't fix. Good luck to you, author!