Review Detail of Scarface3699 in Omniversal Gamer

honestly writing quality is consistent across ur works but this one just feels so slow paced and boring in comparison in just about every aspect. I don't think fixing the pace issue would even necessarily remedy the problem I think conceptually you've started out bad you've put the main character in this unbalanced sandbox with ultimately no central antagonist force or issue that looms to work toward. I think giving ur main character a more unique (not necessarily op) but just strong enough powerset that there'd be reason to want to follow the MC on this freeform roadtrip. Changing the MC personality to be more fun or thrillseeking or just a step up from the pretty much nothing we get here would also help. So in summary I think this is pretty meh to badPS. I hope to one day see u finish a story coz I do think you're a good writer👍