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Item: Never Oppress The Enemy
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If you want to hear honest review I will say it you should explain time skips more briefly ans you should improve your grammar a little bit. And I just want to ask how old are you ☺️

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Thank you i think ive gotten better with the grammar and time skips in the later chapters. Soon im going to go back and edit the first chapters to fix those mistakes. Also I am 16

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