Thelostimmortal

Hey, idiots if you are reading my novel and like it then leave a review. And if anyone have any question he can ask here. And any advice , suggestion is extremely appreciated. Note - English is not my mother tongue so if there are any grammatical error then comment it.

I don't know why there are almost no reviews on this novel. I won't say that this is the best novel but I can say this is a very good and better than many others novel. So, anyone reading this review please review the novel it needs to be noticed.

I'm rating it myself. It doesn't matter if you call me shameless cause I already know I'm. Thus novel is for adults. (It doesn't matter if you're adult or not the thing is I have to write adult warning so I don't violate community 🤫)

bro at least thank me

You should have received power stones first I was thinking but after some time I decided to send it to you.

Shameless review. The first thing I want to tell you guys is that english is not my 1st language so you'll probably see a lot of grammar mistakes. And my novel is not that had so you'll probably find it interesting after you read 1 or 2 chapters. Bye hehehehe 😁

Ok. Thanks I will try.

Yeah if you want you can post your link here.

In first chapter instead of 2 seconds you should do it like 5 or 6minutes. Here is my novel https://m.webnovel.com/book/accepting-disciples-with-an-invincible-system_27344876005226405

Your story is good but your story still has a room for lot of improvements like you can explain the things more briefly and clearly. And im from the forum it took 45 minutes to read all of these chapters. This my novel ols leave a honest review like me https://m.webnovel.com/book/accepting-disciples-with-an-invincible-system_27344876005226405