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Item: Blue Lock: The Destroyer
Rating: 2.4

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Lance_Lv31yrLance_

Chapters are way too short, doesn't make sense for a defensive minded player to be scouted for Blue Lock as they are all strikers, after three or four chapters nothing even happened, just a lot of monologue and boring text. Writing quality as a whole is good and articulate, just need to improve pacing and presentation. Good Luck

Blue Lock: The Destroyer

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Thanks for the review, not gonna lie I know they’re short I don’t got a lot of time to write long chapters due to work and school, also I really want a defensive minded player to join blue lock me personally I like defense in all sports I find it the coolest. Aiku alone in blue lock doesn’t satisfy my hunger for more defensive minded players in the manga.

1yr

Lance_Lv3Lance_

All good everyone has their own circumstances👍🏼

Wraze_Vengeance:Thanks for the review, not gonna lie I know they’re short I don’t got a lot of time to write long chapters due to work and school, also I really want a defensive minded player to join blue lock me personally I like defense in all sports I find it the coolest. Aiku alone in blue lock doesn’t satisfy my hunger for more defensive minded players in the manga.

1yr