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Blue Lock: The Destroyer

Tác giả: Wraze_Vengeance
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Đọc tiểu thuyết Blue Lock: The Destroyer của tác giả Wraze_Vengeance được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Blue Lock self insert, I wrote a novel previously but I lost inspiration for it due to school and work I hope this will be better. Kenta is a physical and defensive monster he’s a force to be reckoned...

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Blue Lock self insert, I wrote a novel previously but I lost inspiration for it due to school and work I hope this will be better. Kenta is a physical and defensive monster he’s a force to be reckoned with, he destroys strikers and defenders alike are you willing to try and score against him.

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Be grateful what you have for Be Careful what you wish for. One wrong wish and fate could change. The game of fate is not famous in a good way. Once it change get yourself use to it Don't wish more or things would be messed up once again. . *Switched* 2 girls belonging to complete different worlds got their souls switched into each others souls. Sandra Holland eldest daughter of the world 2nd biggest mafia in the modern world. she is tougher than iron and stronger than 100 men. Enola Holmes youngest daughter of the prime minister of Salazar empire in ancient world. she is more clever than fox and sharper than leopards. for some unknown reason these girls saw each other in their dreams every night. and once they were drawn into unwanted marriages they wished to be the girl in their dream. to their surprise their dreams came true but as the saying goes careful for you wish for. once their souls got switched their wish came as reality and slap them hard across the face as they were now in an unknown world in an unknowns person's body and were married to unknown men. they struggle to return to their bodies and worlds but always failed thanks to their unwanted and possessive husbands. would they able to return to their bodies and worlds Or would they fall the their wanted husbands and accept the life the have? . . . this story is fully my imagination. also this story may contain violence and adult language Note that i don't promote violence or bad language i only added it to spice up the story! some things might be triggering for some readers read at your own risk

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Lance_
Lance_Lv3Lance_

Chapters are way too short, doesn't make sense for a defensive minded player to be scouted for Blue Lock as they are all strikers, after three or four chapters nothing even happened, just a lot of monologue and boring text. Writing quality as a whole is good and articulate, just need to improve pacing and presentation. Good Luck

human_man_69
human_man_69Lv12human_man_69

it kinda feels like your telling me a summary of everything that was supposed to be in the chapter instead of an actual chapter and it's quite hard to read that way.

Wraze_Vengeance
Wraze_VengeanceTác giảWraze_Vengeance

Listen this ain’t no 5 star novel gang, I’m honestly just having fun with it, a defense minded player joining blue lock sounds cool to me, I love defense its my favorite part in all sports, also yes I know the chapters are short I’ll work on it, also don’t just say too short tell me how I can improve my character and his interactions with others I might make him a mute to not talk at all lol

A_Jax
A_JaxLv1A_Jax

Putting aside the length, I have to agree with everybody else. The story reads more like a logbook than any thing else. It reads like he is talking in past tense even though the grammar suggests otherwise, like he is recounting what happened instead of being in the the present. The grammar itself is ok, the paragraphs are bulky and sometimes you'll forget some punctuation when people are talking.

DerekZhang
DerekZhangLv2DerekZhang

the chapters are very short and the story does not make much sense blue lock would not call a defender for a project that is focused on creating the best striker and the mc sincerely as a player but that he is a monster physically and is a good defender that doesn't change the fact that he seems to be made of glass since basically he's just not a professional because he keeps getting hurt a tip for the author if he wanted to write about a defensive player the mc could be a striker and during the blue lock he would turn a defender

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