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ExArgentum
ExArgentumLv141yr
2023-04-19 10:24

Solo Leveling: Perception is a webnovel that offers a fresh perspective on the world of Solo Leveling by focusing on Jinah, rather than her older sibling Jin-Woo. While the novel boasts well-written character interactions and good writing quality, it's held back by odd nerfs, slow plot development, and short chapters that leave you thinking, "That's it?" In the story, the protagonist gets to choose his world, and he picks Solo Leveling because he loves Jinah. He's granted three wishes with different restrictions, and wishes for Gojo Satoru's Six Eyes, Tatsuya Shiba's Regrowth, and Kurogane Ikki's Complete Material Martial Artist abilities. Set in Jinah's class in Seoul, the novel introduces the protagonist as a transfer student from Japan who wears a blindfold. Driven by his love for Jinah, his primary goal is to get along with her, rather than jumping into dungeons and fighting. One thing I like about this novel is the character interactions. The dialogue is smooth, and the characters stay true to their personalities, making their conversations enjoyable and genuine. The writing is pretty solid, with the author using third-person narration to show what the characters are thinking and feeling. However, there are issues. The nerfs to the protagonist's abilities are confusing and don't make sense. The focus on Jinah, while refreshing, may require more exploration of the protagonist's development. Additionally, the novel doesn't provide much world-building beyond the combat and situations, which could make it feel less immersive. Another concern is the pacing. The chapters are really short, often with just one main event, and the plot moves incredibly slowly. After 20 chapters, it feels like only a week has gone by in the story, which is frustrating. In conclusion, Solo Leveling: Perception is a webnovel that offers a new perspective on the world of Solo Leveling, enjoyable character interactions, and decent writing. However, the confusing nerfs, short chapters, and slow plot development prevent it from reaching its full potential. With more focus on the protagonist's development, improved pacing, and better world-building, this novel could become a much more enjoyable read.

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RemindToMe
RemindToMeLv3

sensei

Mamdouh_mohamed
Mamdouh_mohamedLv12

Zbara_1577
Zbara_1577Lv4

No way! An actual review?

Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5

Reads like chatgpt imma be honest Kudos to the user though

Zbara_1577:No way! An actual review?
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DarkCreation101
DarkCreation101Lv4

Don't know why he's obsessed with her, I get she has potential but in my eyes, she's a third rate compared to any of the other female characters in the novel...

Genesis_YT
Genesis_YTLv4

well you cant just put make a review on (fanfiction name) and expect it to look anything pike this its a jumbked mess

Dieudonner_17:Reads like chatgpt imma be honest Kudos to the user though
Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5

Huh

Genesis_YT:well you cant just put make a review on (fanfiction name) and expect it to look anything pike this its a jumbked mess
Mad_Uchiha303
Mad_Uchiha303Lv12

I think that he thinks that you think that the review is chat gpt esque or even one as it is too clean and well written (typed)And so he and argues that you can't just assume that the review is chatgpt generated as not all reviews are just jumbled mess

Dieudonner_17:Huh
Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5

Huh Thanks a lot😁

Mad_Uchiha303:I think that he thinks that you think that the review is chat gpt esque or even one as it is too clean and well written (typed)And so he and argues that you can't just assume that the review is chatgpt generated as not all reviews are just jumbled mess
Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

Nope sorry fam but its gpt's creation. Ran it through the script thats made to check if it AI written or not and it showed this being a gpt's creation

Mad_Uchiha303:I think that he thinks that you think that the review is chat gpt esque or even one as it is too clean and well written (typed)And so he and argues that you can't just assume that the review is chatgpt generated as not all reviews are just jumbled mess
Mad_Uchiha303
Mad_Uchiha303Lv12

Was not really saying it wasn't, was just explaining. But still, cool

Enlightened_Clown:Nope sorry fam but its gpt's creation. Ran it through the script thats made to check if it AI written or not and it showed this being a gpt's creation
DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

Don't easily trust those. It detects AI like patterns in your writings, which can be imitated, intentionally, or not. Though no one would really do that in professional settings.

Enlightened_Clown:Nope sorry fam but its gpt's creation. Ran it through the script thats made to check if it AI written or not and it showed this being a gpt's creation
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Lol😂😂

Zbara_1577:No way! An actual review?
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ExArgentum
ExArgentumLv14

Yeah, good observation. TBH, once I realized ChatGPT was a thing, I’ll occasionally just input all my notes on the novel and let it write something legible. It has none of my voice and tone, but gets the idea to other readers when I have no time. If the novel is a 5 though, time to bust out the hands.

Dieudonner_17:Reads like chatgpt imma be honest Kudos to the user though
ExArgentum
ExArgentumLv14

Be very careful and skeptical with those. According to research and even OpenAI themselves, AI checkers don’t work. There’s a less than 2% accurate rate so they scrapped their AI detection project. Most of the people getting caught are them just telling ChatGPT to write something without any input. Most people have notes and ideas they tell ChatGPT, making the writing very difficult to distinguish. Like, there will be certain tells if ChatGPT did most of it, but very little evidence if the user is actually doing work themselves alongside it.

Enlightened_Clown:Nope sorry fam but its gpt's creation. Ran it through the script thats made to check if it AI written or not and it showed this being a gpt's creation
Owais_Khan_4634
Owais_Khan_4634Lv4

Owais_Khan_4634
Owais_Khan_4634Lv4

come on, at least you get to know what to expect while reading the novel

Dieudonner_17:Reads like chatgpt imma be honest Kudos to the user though
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