Dude punctuation goes a long way to making people want to read your story. Get a proof reader or a grammar program of some kind cause my brain keeps stalling trying figure out what I’m reading.
Psy_duck
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thanks you for the advice, I already use grammarly I will try to take notice in my punctuation in the future.
is this a harem??
Psy_duck:thanks you for the advice, I already use grammarly I will try to take notice in my punctuation in the future.image