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When did Jaune pick his shield up? Wasn’t it still on the floor?
Which is it? Did he look up or did he not?
What do you mean? An entire planet was just evacuated. There’s no way it doesn’t get out to the public.
You put Vernal instead of April.
I think ancient magic affecting his animagus form would be interesting. Like instead of a normal animal he can morph into a magical creature.
How do you get the name wrong the paragraph immediately after correctly doing so?
I’m rather enjoying it so far, and I hope to see how it unfolds. Keep up the good work.
That’s only 4 runes.
Ron’s pet is a rat not a hamster.
Is there any particular in world reason the characters are using Japanese honorifics or is that just because you want to?
Still here waiting patiently.
Which is it? Nakiri or Ouryuu?
This one.
What happened to his magic armor?
Would you have preferred something like Mighteon?
Why would he try to name her if he realized that she was a human trapped as a bird? Also going right for her real name seems unnatural.
Bell didn’t say his last name.
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