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Jadeite_Green
Jadeite_GreenLv39mthJadeite_Green

Your story was good but, I wanted to share a couple of tip. In chapter 2, it might be helpful to add some spacing for better readability, and I noticed a few spelling errors. Keep up the good work!

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UniqueKarmaTác giảUniqueKarma

I have taken care of the writing problems and spacing please take your time to go through it again for any more problem. And thank you again for your time.

UniqueKarma
UniqueKarmaTác giảUniqueKarma

yeah sorry[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Jadeite_Green
Jadeite_GreenLv3Jadeite_Green

UniqueKarma:yeah sorry[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]