Jadeite_Green
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[The Lazy and Shy Author] [ FB: Jadeite Green ] [Subscribe on:Youtube] https://youtube.com/@JadeiteGreenAuthor?si=Jp5h5c2tXAlMpywy [ Twitter: Jadeite Green ]
2019-01-09 đã tham giaPhilippines
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Jadeite_Green8mthbình luận[Sacred Doctor's College, Philippines]- Jadeite_Green9mthtrả lời UelUelPeta is surely taking her sweet time tonight. I really have an urge to sleep, so I gently shut my eyes, getting ready to slip into a much-needed slumber.
- Jadeite_Green9mthtrả lời Yukinizce
- Jadeite_Green9mthcông bố
Hello, Author. From what I've read in chapters 1 through 3, there appear to be some errors, such as incorrect use of punctuation, and starting in chapter 4, you only focus on the character's dialogue. In order to increase the readers' interest in your story, add more description of the setting as well as details about the characters' actions and thoughts. That's all, continue the wonderful job.
- Jadeite_Green9mthbình luận
I think it is better if you do not use capital letters in this line.
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- Jadeite_Green9mthcông bố
- Jadeite_Green9mthbình luậnAbigail looked confused at first and pouted, looking extremely depressed as traces of sadness appeared on her face. "You… You didn't even let me finish. I was so close to the ending!"
- Jadeite_Green9mthcông bố
I'm enjoying your story so far. keep up the food work❤❤❤
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