Pretty interesting setting and character. The english quality is readable and the world seems interesting. Although it is sometimes a little confusing to read as you don’t use paragraphs as often. I think the strongest point of your story right now is the plot, as it makes the reader wonder about what will happen next.
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Liked it!
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