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judsuias

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What is judsuias

Đọc tiểu thuyết judsuias của tác giả asdsdaasd được xuất bản trên WebNovel."In order to keep everyone secure, vengeance is required. Although I may have been your slave, who is the slave now?""As cleaning is currently your only goal, my dear father, I really do hope you like...

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"In order to keep everyone secure, vengeance is required. Although I may have been your slave, who is the slave now?" "As cleaning is currently your only goal, my dear father, I really do hope you like it!" *Whip, Whip* "Oh father, you're so filthy. You ought to be cleaning, not making everything dirtier."

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Lawrence_Oshim
Lawrence_OshimLv4Lawrence_Oshim

Nice story, nice setting, plot and all that, very intriguing also buy almost not to easy to understand, either ways the book is good 👍to the author

VoidCeremonist
VoidCeremonistLv1VoidCeremonist

Pretty interesting setting and character. The english quality is readable and the world seems interesting. Although it is sometimes a little confusing to read as you don’t use paragraphs as often. I think the strongest point of your story right now is the plot, as it makes the reader wonder about what will happen next.

WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryLv1WorthyAdversary

A pretty good novel. The writing quality is pretty okay, with pretty good English, although the author tends to write a lot of run on sentences and has a few dependent clauses just hanging there. The stability of updates and story development are fine, although I really can't judge them that much right now due to the newness of the novel. Character design is the best part of the novel, with the MC being a pretty in depth character with a lot of duality to him. World background, like the stability of updates and the story development is pretty fine, generic, not anything new yet, so 4 across the board except for character design, which is a 5.

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