Review Detail of Jimbai3870 in Naruto: Night Owl

Item: Naruto: Night Owl
Rating: 2.6

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Jimbai3870Lv31yrJimbai3870

I mean..? Grammar is great. Everything else is just… mediocre. I couldn’ even get past chap 3-4 i don’t remember. His wishes are dumb. He gets beat by a 6 year old itachi when he has about 60+ years of the absolute greatest martial artists in comic books history… author can say he lost on purpose but it sure didn’ seem that way. Youre character is cringy lazy and underwhelming.

Naruto: Night Owl

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Primus_MonarchLv2Primus_Monarch

seriously, you only read 3-4 chapter?

1yr

FunWriterLv2FunWriter

Ah. .buddy, read the rest. Then you'll have change in this opinion.

1yr

KING_IN_YELLOWLv4KING_IN_YELLOW

yup someone's dummy acc

FunWriter:Ah. .buddy, read the rest. Then you'll have change in this opinion.

1yr

BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

Will you ever come back to write?

FunWriter:Ah. .buddy, read the rest. Then you'll have change in this opinion.

1yr

FunWriterLv2FunWriter

I'm back! But with a two new MHA ff. My only concern is should I make them reincarnated who doesn't know about MHA, reincarnated who knows about MHA, or non reincarnated person

Brokedepressed:Will you ever come back to write?

1yr

BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

You could pick 2 of the three and write a story for each since you said you had 2 fanfics

FunWriter:I'm back! But with a two new MHA ff. My only concern is should I make them reincarnated who doesn't know about MHA, reincarnated who knows about MHA, or non reincarnated person

1yr

FunWriterLv2FunWriter

Thanks mate. And it's good to see you😁

Brokedepressed:You could pick 2 of the three and write a story for each since you said you had 2 fanfics

1yr