*This is my personal view on the development of the story.* It started out so good! it had me instantly recommending the story to a friend, as I loved the whole short Arc of him being a Trooper, but from there I must say it sped up quite a bit, him turning into a padawan right after the first war/scuffle. which, for me, left much to be desired. As I had hoped for him to take the captain/commander role for a while longer as a Trooper. But again, this is just my personal view, the story is good and well fleshed out, so do check it out as it has plenty unique points.
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