VirtuelGentleman
Just an avid reader who reads quite a lot. God forbid authors who drop excellent stories.
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*This is my personal view on the development of the story.* It started out so good! it had me instantly recommending the story to a friend, as I loved the whole short Arc of him being a Trooper, but from there I must say it sped up quite a bit, him turning into a padawan right after the first war/scuffle. which, for me, left much to be desired. As I had hoped for him to take the captain/commander role for a while longer as a Trooper. But again, this is just my personal view, the story is good and well fleshed out, so do check it out as it has plenty unique points.
Eh?? why does the story keep saying he’s only been gone for 4 years while 7 years has passed by, what.
Its weird yeah, but lets just say its a special stat and the ALL from before meant ALL basic stats 🤷🏼♂️
Hm? his name was Elminster Frederick Fawley before? was it not?
Can you pick one El or Elmi 😭
I would have left this instance if that was a thing. I really hope he will not do it in the future.
DEX would have made more sense tho
Political marriage ? more like a power up marriage ! 😦
wdym they will be the only people to know? when they roll the credits everyone will know, unless you tell them to put the name Prince Aeric instead. lol
How would they know where your castle is when they cant see it?
What kind of halloween party is this.
This is the closest I could get to what I imagine the MC could look like, as its now a mix between Vegeta and Gohan because of the hair growth potion.