Review Detail of EternalEden in Aden Strong: Avatar In DC

The story has its issues, but I tried to ignore it because it also has some good. However, two issues forced me to drop this. The MC does something stupid and then gets saved by a Deus Ex Machina. This happens a couple of times. Also, the MC has a "Revelation" every so often about how wrong he was and how he needs to learn *blank*. But it never ends. There must've been like 20 "Revelations" and he's still as dumb as a brick. It feels like a waste of time, because any supposed lesson he learns means nothing. And when he inevitably screws up, he'll just get saved by a plot device anyway.