The duels are good, and the writing is pretty good too. However, what really bothers me is the MC's personality. The whole shy, withdrawn, and soft-spoken thing was alright in the beginning, but became annoying later on. But what REALLY bothers me, is that the MC is helpless. She'll go through a duel with a powerful enemy and come out on top only to cower and think things like: "Please don't hurt me...are they going to hurt me?" It's frustrating and makes me lose all respect I have for them. And it happens pretty often.

Thanks dude, I was looking for a fair review from someone that was far in the story.

The story has its issues, but I tried to ignore it because it also has some good. However, two issues forced me to drop this. The MC does something stupid and then gets saved by a Deus Ex Machina. This happens a couple of times. Also, the MC has a "Revelation" every so often about how wrong he was and how he needs to learn *blank*. But it never ends. There must've been like 20 "Revelations" and he's still as dumb as a brick. It feels like a waste of time, because any supposed lesson he learns means nothing. And when he inevitably screws up, he'll just get saved by a plot device anyway.

Tftc

If you don't like my vote you could have just moved on. Why do you have to give it a callout? Do you see how silly that sounds now? I am free to show my dislike, just like you are.

Thank you for the chapter. Kinda hope the werewolf curing thing would hurry up though. I know it's groundbreaking and all, but its been eating up a lot of the story's time...

I'm stealing this.

Control? This can all be stopped with just two words: "I refuse."

The amount of info dumps you need to get through to even START this story is atrocious. Also, the MC's "Golden Finger" is way too much. He has a dozen different powers he completely customized before even being reborn. It's honestly not fun when the MC can have whatever they want with zero effort.

Came for a witty character and an interesting spin on the series. Left with a depressed little emo and the same shenanigans as the first-year story. Despite all the changes the author likes to pretend happened, the end result is the same. And sure, maybe things won't change immediately, but expecting their readers to endure 60+ chapters before they actually get there makes them a clown.

Eres un idiota increíble. Ésa es la respuesta más vaga que alguien podría dar. "Si no te gusta, haz algo mejor". Oh, lo siento, debo haber olvidado que no se nos permite tener una opinión sobre algo.

No. Because now I already have a billion dollars.

Bro was terrified at the idea of causing so many human and Pokemon deaths. Now he's TRYING to cause them...

Thanks for the chapter. I'm a bit surprised this story is releasing regularly.

*so

You're doing well. At this point, the story might become closer to a slice-of-life story, but that's fine. I'd be entertained seeing Earth's advancement and possible integration with the galactic civilizations and/or powers. Maybe some small hiccups along the way like Kang the Conqueror. Marvel IS allergic to peace after all, lol.

Considering the alien attack, and the portal invasion, Earth isn't thrilled to trade with outsiders yet...

Thanks for the chapter, glad to see this is continuing. :)

The story is rather unique, and it does seem like the author tries to put their own spin on things. However, this is heavily undermined by a big flaw of the story. The author has about as much subtlety as a wrecking ball. They're not very good at creating sudden events in a realistic manner. Problems will pop up left and right, with little to no warning, or sometimes even reason. Giving the flimsy excuse the MC must somehow be unlucky. When this author wants something to happen, it will happen, quality be damned. Many times they can't even be bothered to put in the effort for it not to come off as jarring. This is a very frequent problem in the story, and it makes it rather difficult to enjoy despite its positives.

Author, I'm trusting you to go somewhere with this instead of it just being "A valuable lesson"...