Review Detail of shadow_serpent in Creator's gift

this book is really interesting. I feel like it could be fleshed out a bit more but otherwise not much to say. seeing as it's still roughly in its starting phase, I can't really say TOO much, considering there isn't much to go on. usually I'd wait till it had 100+ chapters but I figured why not just do it now. The characters are well made. the world's are done well. Overall story is a solid 9/10.