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shadow_serpent3dbình luậnPick one. Get to know them both. Then choose. orrrr have readers choose waifu. (I vote Ranni)
I didn't like spending money, but this could be a great opportunity to get closer to Ranni .. or Mikeyla .. ughh I'm the worst, just pick one .. or pick all?- shadow_serpent6dbình luận
you should be more consistent with when he calls out his attacks if he's going to. However, It'd be better if he just mental casted the spells/skills (in my opinion)
"Aquakinesis!" - shadow_serpent11dbình luận
I feel like this is outta place. it should either be changed or just deleted in general.
It happened very fortuitously. - shadow_serpent14dbình luậnCh 187 Chapter 187- Road Trip In An Apocalyptic World
- shadow_serpent21dbình luận
no such thing
I think I went overboard and made the chapter too long - shadow_serpent22dbình luận
??
I pity the poor sap that has to ascend to the next circle without my [Cultivation] skill. - shadow_serpent25dbình luậnCh 180 Chapter 180- Fire Lead
- shadow_serpent1mthbình luận
I feel like the "gosa waters" is repeated to much here.
After four days of flight, they had reached the coastline of Gosa Waters.detailSchool Transmigration: I, Chosen as the Saint by Dragons at the StartKỳ huyễn · Sesame_Cookies - shadow_serpent1mthbình luận
just finished my binge read of this lovely novel and now it's time for a mini-review!!Overall, the story is superb. Although it does take a bit to pick up in pace, it's worth the wait. The slight errors in Grammer are neglible. Overall a great read. Can't wait for more!(side note- it'd be interesting if mc could use his quirk to maybe give/alter people's quirk factor. or maybe his at least. Only reason I say it'd be possible is when he mentioned how he shape-shifts, Like his body is lines of code and he just edits it. He could do that to others once he reaches a certain mastery over his quirk. Just a thought.)
Ch 85 Chapter 84:- Attackers Identity - shadow_serpent1mthbình luận
because the only other powered person he's seen other than him and David is there? I feel like that's a good reason.
With little time for contemplation, Malachi decided to inform the group upstairs first that they were safe to come outside. There was no specific reason for choosing this group first; it was a quick, instinctive decision. - shadow_serpent2mthtrả lời Bodhi_sattva
no problem! I try to do it when I catch repeated mistakes. I'd recommend re-reading what you have posted so far and check for errors.
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - shadow_serpent2mthtrả lời Kinshu_War
I am now far more inclined to read this through. However, small tip, you often no place "i" before "am" so it comes as "am sorry, ____"
But what he or Lovette didn't expect was that that very determination would be a catalyst of something much greater and beautiful in Cole's journey. - shadow_serpent2mthtrả lời Kinshu_War
hopefully no harem.
But what he or Lovette didn't expect was that that very determination would be a catalyst of something much greater and beautiful in Cole's journey. - shadow_serpent2mthbình luận
"Dave seized the opportunity, "?? who's Dave? And what opportunity?
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - shadow_serpent2mthbình luận
??????
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This entire paragraph makes no sense.
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - shadow_serpent2mthtrả lời Ben_CresswellCh 17 Sword
- shadow_serpent2mthbình luận
so wait, this increases status durations for him? and Like skill effect-duration?
- The user calls upon the Gha Agsheblah Domain that doubles the user's time for a certain duration.