Review Detail of AkuaSenpai in Ecto-Yaksh

Wow, okay the lore runs deeper than any book I've seen on here so far. The world-building is great and the story is going in a very exciting direction. This is really a world to get immersed in and enjoy. There are a few things holding it back like minor grammatical errors - it doesn't effect how the story is read so much but there are moments where it does break the immersion a little. But in all honesty, that isn't enough to pull you away from what is a great narrative.