I like writing and making up stories.
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Thank you a lot. Sometimes it's hard to update daily, I can't even update for a week or more because of school. But I do plan to start updating at least once every two days! Again thank you for your review!
The writing quality is amazing, I liked the characters, world background wasn't the strongest point, but nothing to worry about. Keep up the good work author!
It's a really good first chapter. I had fun reading it! Bayu is interesting, and I wonder who is that woman, and what's the deal with this library.👍
I love the way you portray his emotions/actions and thoughts. 😄
Interesting!
The pronunciation is on the harder side. I wanted to make it so that you can hear the hard ''R''. Well, it's best to read it out loud and make it sound the way that's more fitting for you. And thank you for your comment!
As of right now, I'm trying to fix the first few chapters to make them not so confusing. Thank you for the review!
Thank you! I will fix the issues you mentioned!
The plot is interesting. The writing quality is good, but still needs some work. Story develops nicely so I had no problems with that. I would like to see how Shade's character goes on in the story(the way he thinks etc.) Over all good work author!