Review Detail of Coyle in A blooming love: fate and destiny

First of all, the grammar of this novel may scare some of the readers, but it's nothing that can't be solved with the use of sites like Grammarly, and some time writing. Second, I couldn't quite understand some important things, like, what is the name of the kingdom where she resides? What is her social position? And why there is a woman called 'queen' that holds more power that the two female consorts? I mean, imperial consorts and queen means the same, so this doesn't make any sense. Third and also my principal problem, is that in this story there isn't a constant narrator. (And that the chapters are rather short) Fourth and last, you're introducing too many characters at the same time, which, to be honest, is confusing me. There's is nothing more that I can say with only 3 chapters, the only thing I can say is that, you shouldn't stop writing, it doesn't matter if you're getting negative reviews, what matters you're liking writing it. (And with this cheesy line, I bookmark this novel!)