Coyle

I think this story can be something great, however, there is a big problem in this tale. The author puts too many unnecessary descriptions and info dumps. (Ex: Chapter 1) we don't need to know all of that right at the start. Also, the writing style isn't very appealing to me (maybe because it shows the emotions and motives of everyone, which seems great in theory but isn't at all. There is no mystery.) That being said, the story seems to be progressing rather well and I'm sure that with time, the 'problems' I pointed out in this review will change. Please continue with the great work, author!!

Thank you for the review!

Glad to know, thank you for the review!

While this is not the type of novel I usually read, I liked it. There were errors in the grammar but nothing that ruined the experience too much. (But if possible, please find a proofreader.)

I found this pretty enjoyable. Please give me more chapters!

He is dumb

I'm not sure if mam is also correct tho

Btw the correct word is "Ma'am"

at this rate she will end like this:

nah