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4.8 / 5 Awesome story!!! Really good plot. The world building is nice, the characters have a realistic feel about them, making them feel a lot better than chars in 99% of all webnovels here. System & Magic & Stats & Skills all make sense and feel very interesting. One thing you could improve on is to try to condense the stats a bit. You are already at a point where he has so many skills, spells and abilities that it is a bit chaotic. You yourself forgot a few times to add skills & abilities he used to the list. Also there are quite a few typos. Anyway just a minor thing you could potentially improve... anyway it is nearly perfect. It is on the level where I would actually pay to read this.

Records of the Dark Magus

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Thank you for the awesome review. I was considering starting to write again, but I don't have much free time anymore

NiceReviewer
NiceReviewerLv4NiceReviewer

So many stories got monetized... yours is easily qualified too. Maybe take a break and write a bit on the weekends? Maybe save up a few chapters and then try to get monetized too. Maybe even reread/rewrite a few chapters and aim for an Amazon release. Trust me your book is actually good. So good that you could make money with it if you really try.

Eggcellent:Thank you for the awesome review. I was considering starting to write again, but I don't have much free time anymore
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TReX_GamingLv13TReX_Gaming

Oui une des meilleures histoires bon travail continue.

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SIN3Lv2SIN3

Can you continue in the future?

Eggcellent:Thank you for the awesome review. I was considering starting to write again, but I don't have much free time anymore