ChangedReviewer

FINALLY!!!

Unreadable. MC has already awakened his Goro Goro no mi at chapter 1. This is a chinese garbage story. The translation quality is also only barely above acceptable. Looks like it's mostly machine translated with a MINOR bit of editing by probably the same person who came up with the summary... read it if you want to know that person's English level.

Just a talk in the middle of a battle? Is this filler?

I like the story but the AI influence is too heavy. The author can BARELY write in English and uses AI to write the story. You can just read the summary and you see the first part completely written by AI and the second part by the author himself with tons of grammatical & spelling errors.

Why are you acting like you are writing the story? Isn't it just a cheap chinese stolen Fanfic which you translate with AI?

I don't get these settings. If you combine 2 generic ideas your story will not get twice as interesting but twice as generic. The writing is decent and the story itself somewhat interesting. Sadly imo the premise is boring and not really entertaining. The story itself is interesting but very chaotic.

Naruto: I QUIT - this story :( It had potential but got abandoned, what a shame.

I love how wrong this turns out to be ;) Fucking genius comedian.