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It's a pretty good novel. Maybe when more than two people are talking add the persons name after the sentence to show that it is this person who said that line. Other than that its all good, keep it up!

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Thank you for your review! In the future, I will make sure to make whoever's talking a bit more obvious. I understand that at times it may be confusing, and since dialogue is an important part of my story, I will try to fix this in future chapters.

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