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Specific score: 3.8 Death Zone is the story of Kevin wanting to become the King of this world. Seems familiar? This story is pretty similar to Black Clover... and at first, I thought I was reading a fanfic of Black Clover with different characters. However, the author managed to make it a tad different. While the beginning seems a bit too much like that series, I ask readers to give it a try, since this story feels like it will become something a bit more different. Now onto the writing. It's not bad, but it could definitely improve. The writing feels like it's in Visual Novel format without the Visual Novel, which is a tad weird. I recommend the author to read a couple of novels and see how the format works. There's several grammar errors, but nothing that requires me to wash my eyes out. It's alright and it's readable. I feel like the story can become a lot better in the future when the author gains a bit more writing experience. And when it does, I'll be sure to change my review. In the meantime, please check out Death Zone.
Thank you for the review! The beginning is a bit slow, but I promise the future chapters will be very interesting! Expect more exciting things in the future!
If that's the case, then I guess Kojima and Damien will become muscle buddies too haha
Sometimes following an edgelord is worth losing coffee for.
He called the waiter for Sayuri. Although that's an odd thing to do, haha.
Thank you for your review! I will make sure to keep the POV switching as smooth as possible!
Thank you for the kind words! It's nice to know that you're curious about their abilities. You'll have to tune in to find out!
Thank you for your review! I'll try to continue making this story accessible for all. I appreciate the nice words!
As of this review, I have read 5 chapters. Specific Rating: 5 out of 5 star This story is amazing. The character design and writing quality are sublime. I can tell the author put a lot of work crafting everything, from the world-building to the characters. I did find it difficult to read at times, and the first chapter was so long it felt as if it lasted an hour, but other than that, the writing was great. One thing that saddened me was the stability of updates. The author has said that they will update every Friday, which is definitely a bit long. It's a shame that we have to wait this long for such a great book. However, if waiting one week is the price to pay to get such quality, then I'm up for it. Other than that, all I have to say is: "Good job, author!"
Shameless 5 Star Review No Jutsu! (Before we start, I'd like to say that Project Libra has a discord server, the link is in the synopsis if you would like to join.) Alright, let's stop with the shameless plugs here. I'm Erxian, author of "Project Libra". Thank you for taking the time to read the reviews A little bit about myself. Well, I'm a non-native English speaker, a total weeb, and a sucker for fantasy novels. Pretty short introduction, but I think I listed everything I needed. Any feedback is appreciated. I will do my very best to answer every review possible so I can get the maximum amount of feedback. Your feedback helps me create the story in a way you and I can enjoy it. Thank you, and happy reading!