first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense, don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains, make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power, don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money. if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.

This novel is barely in the reading to pass time zone. The problem is that the world building and the mechanics of the magic system aren't defined in a consistent way. Which leads to the MC being awesome, but not comparable to anything. If one can reach a rank with enough training, why does the difference between spells matter so much? Why is it important to condese magic power? The author simply tells us it is and we as the readers have to accept it. An example is the fact that the MC always practices only the basics of magic and so far only one element. Why? Why are the basics so important? I understand that the basics can strengthen the foundation and this is important, but even the most patient and wise humans on the planet know that advanced techniques are important in any field, that is why they were developed. It feels like the only reason the MC practices at all is to get the system rewards, which is what actually gives him strength. It is like he goes to work every day for money, he doesn't gain anything during practice, he just gets rewarded for doing so. MC is also way to passive and mostly a nonentity in this story. We could literally exchange him for any other student and nothing would change.

The synopsis is very interesting. It has good potential. And magic world novels are always interesting! ....................................

first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense, don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains, make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power, don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money. if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.

Generic. MC could be replaced by a pokemon and it wouldn't make a difference (like it can launch magic attacks, it has levels and practically just keeps repeating its name) not to mention the boring enemies it finds everywhere it goes. There's a girl in the story, or it could be a Ditto with a female name that's hard to say. The pokemon league must be somewhere in chapter twenty it must be when he starts hitting others before going to another continent to look for more people to hit.

Really bad book no interactions, 0 development, mc is always hiding even when is strong, translation is trash. basically overall don’t waste your time on this trash.

Synopsis states MC name is Ryan, then it is Lin Lie, then linley. That and the start just seems all over the place.,..........................

Translation quality honestly just kills this story for me, it keeps changing terms like the realm of mages int the story from chapter to chapter and is not consitent at all. The story is nothing special, op mc who hides his strength, because he is not strong enough yet to show it and needs to reach the peak first.

Anyone know the alternative name or raw name? .....................................................................................................................................................................................................