Review Detail of Jay_Synergy in The Villain Within

Author's shameless review here. This is my newest story "The Villain Within". I am not sure of how often I will upload new chapters but I will try my best. I will also be doing things a bit different as I try to avoid major clichés to make my story a bit more unique. Some of you may remember my previous work "Man Made Demon" and thanks for the support on that work.