Jay_Synergy

Author's shameless review here. This is my newest story "The Villain Within". I am not sure of how often I will upload new chapters but I will try my best. I will also be doing things a bit different as I try to avoid major clichés to make my story a bit more unique. Some of you may remember my previous work "Man Made Demon" and thanks for the support on that work.

I completely agree with your points which is why I dropped the story, and thank you for taking the time to give constructive criticism. I have plans for another story soon and plan to use all I have learned from experience, reviews, and comments in order to make it a much better story than this one was.

Thank you.

Same

We shall see although I have been slacking on writing the story for a while.

You have a good point. Maybe the other group members would have agreed that he was suspicious. Maybe he did not think of the old man helping him.

no.

If only he could :(

Thank you. I am still new to this but have learned a lot.

Thank You :)