Review Detail of D_Rain_Smells in Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

I would say author Just started and your writing is throwing me off . I understand this is function but sometimes You beed to apply logic you literally made her some kind of OP character from the start with the cultivation WhatNot. Being good at cultivation doesnt necessarily mean one would be good with chakra whatever i would have prefeered a bettr character development and whatnot than some OP lil kid