Rufus and hades remind me of Kevin and ren. Thank you for the chapter

I will be honest author I’ m enjoying this, but can you tone down his edginess other than that thank you for the chapter

Abi oo but I think the author go make dem lose

This is just sad author be original. You basically copied author’s pov which is downright plagiarism even if you changed the names. Please do better I’m sure you have great ideas in that head of yours use those ideas rather than copying other works

I ignored the harem because of the plot but the brother sis vibe that author wants to create is absolutely disgusting but overall the novel is okay

I would say author Just started and your writing is throwing me off . I understand this is function but sometimes You beed to apply logic you literally made her some kind of OP character from the start with the cultivation WhatNot. Being good at cultivation doesnt necessarily mean one would be good with chakra whatever i would have prefeered a bettr character development and whatnot than some OP lil kid