Review Detail of mrCat in Sin of Kin

Thank you for spending your precious time for reading my story, really. appreciate it. However, would you like to "describe" in detail about that lack in writing? And are my grammar mistakes so bad that you were having a difficulty to understand it? I saw you just read the first few chapters, would you mind to tell me which chapters that difficult to understand? After all I want to rewrite those first few chapters. It's not that I doubting your constructive review, but you are the first person who told me there's a difficulty to understand the story. I want to fix it right away. I'm truly sorry for the inconvenience, for english is not my native language... though I'll try my best to minimal the mistakes. Once again, thank you very much for your constructive review.

its not like u made many mistakes, rather than grammer, I would say that... the grammer is okay, but what's wrong is u added few words here and there that made the meaning of Para a little off but once u avoid those words or won't mid it. the story is really good

Ah, you mean the "figure of speech" I used a bit... redundant? Because I did use that kind of phrase quite a lot becoming my habit, similar to this (...) 😅

hahaha, it's okay, just few mistakes but it's apart from that, the story is really good

try reading when i got reincarnated as a spider with my goddess you won't be disappointed

ahahaa already read it, it's F amazing

there are like 3 person that reviewed it the rest are probably bots becoz many of them just post one review didn't read anything and also were created this year and also he just spam the novel that's on his own account