Just an amateur writer, Writing for fun; to craft stories, and to create memories~ ^^
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Thank you so much. So glad you're enjoying it so far, despite its snail's pace and the "wheneverly" update >< and to think there's still someone waiting for a chapter update with so much patience... in fact I can't thank you enough, But please, if there's something weighing on you about the story so far, you are welcome (no, but I demand you) to write any criticism, feedback, and or suggestion, regarding everything related to the story... I'll take all of it into consideration to write an enjoyable story for us all.
hmm odd... I'm using app and my reply comment still thereWebnovel can sometimes get funky huh? 😅😂
besides, I chose female mc since the opposite we already have the male lead... and I kinda inspired from the trio of female demons: Labasu, Labartu, Akhkhazu, from mesopotamian mythology
What? weird, I didn't delete my reply comment though... and it is still there answering whether or not it's a yuri story... and the answer, it is not a yuri story, not even this story aimed to go deeper into a romance one, there's romance but only an allusion to it.Once again, I didn't delete my reply comment ><
nope it's not yuri. Though there are bound to be an allusion of romance (same or opposite) this story doesn't aim to go deep into it...
What you just said is a 101 writing a smart mc, which basically is "making other characters stupid to make the mc looks smarter."
well, and because the enemy side is mostly incompetent. They outnumbered them the battlefield to my knowledge is a complete flat land without labyrinth-like terrain... once the fog popped and the opponent's side which oddly retreated and scattered, I'd have the enemies soldiers to charge towards the main camp with overwhelming numbers and had the mages to support from behind or maybe planting magical landmine if that exists in this story. But still, it's sink or swim tactic, only depended on high numbers and luck... and some of them may die, but that is the sacrifice I'm willing to make.
well, Faith in fact doesn't need any "tactic" to begin with, even as a pure support her op-ness already rigged the war from the start.
Instead to restrain, I think Faith should be at peaceful with this so-called ancient will... because you are "peaceful" when you are capable of great violence, but you do not choose to do.
there you go, folks... another edgy main character