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Okay, here is my honest review. The plot is good, the story is really good. Your imagination amazes me. But when you write, always capitalize words that needed to be capitalized, e.g, names of people or places. Try to do research before just writing down a scenario. Like the king was losing blood and he felt hot to the touch. A person losing blood will feel cold and not hot. If you plan to have action scenes, always check for the effects of certain things and happenings. Anyways, I'll add this to library because it's good.
Pharaoh : The Last Sun
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Honestly, i started this book to improve my skills in writing. I knew i was bad when i started but i try to improve with every chapter i write. For you to say this, it’s honestly an inspiration for me to keep going and i thank you for that. Now i know i’ll be more cautious when i write because you spoke up about my flaws, thank you again for speaking up, now i’ve got an idea of the do’s and dont’s.