This is really good! I am in love with the story plot and characters! I hope to see more updates in the future. Added to library. More power author!

This one has a good plot but the writing style is a bit messy. It would help the readers if you do cleaning for your capitalization, punctuation and grammar. I hope to see more updates in the future. Added to library. More power author!

This is really good! I am in love with the story plot and characters! I hope to see more updates in the future. Added to library. More power author!

This is really good! I am in love with the story plot and characters! I hope to see more updates in the future. Added to library. More power author!

That's normal.. just keep at it.. you'll get better at it on the way..

Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good. I love a strong female lead and it is served here. Added to library. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

Okay, this is an interesting story thus far. The chapters are not long but the the writing is good. But, I hope you don't put too much spaces cos it's annoying to see when reading. I can't say more since the novel is still in the early stage. Will review again if it gets longer. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

Okay, this is cute story thus far. The characters are fun and cute like i read it all in one go, noe i can't wait for more. But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good. But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good. But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

Okay, this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the writing style is very good. There were not many mistakes too. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

Cute.

Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good. But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

Thanks for the update. ^.^

This is my first time reading this type of writing style so I'm not quite fond of it. There are mistakes but they were minor and can easily be cleaned. I hope to read more. I hope you won't drop this. More power author!

What?

Thanks for the updates.. ^.^

I'm amazed at how long every chapter you is. Thanks for the update.. ^.^

It's amazing how author could thin about this kind of plot. Plus points to the explanations given in the authors notes that are quite a leaning experience. I hope you won't drop this as it has a lot of potential.