Review Detail of Alex1911 in Another Life as Older Brother

Is this how you show you respect to the author. All i see is complain complain and complain. Maybe u don't like the plot no need to be disrespectful. And think from the view of the author if someone is saying negative things about his/her writing and demanding changes in the plot just Because someone doesn't like it. And I'm not saying u can't comment on the author but keep it moderate.

I believe this is a review, not complain, I simply point out what I think is good points and bad points of the novel and give stars accordingly, if there are place in my review you believe are wrong, please do tell me.

I do have to agree with the last point Author doesn't really do it. and I do like these kind of reviews since I know what to look for in the novel.

You are the type of person who would eat a dish even after you seen the cook spitting in it; and when a friend of yours tries to point out that the guy has just spat in your meal, you'll lash out at them, screeching at the top of your lungs how they are "disrespecting revered cook's work". What next, we'll resort to the "go write your own novel if you don't like it" arguement? Please develop some common sense. And if the author is seriously going ape about people talking back to him, he should consider growing thicker skin and not being a giant baby.

I don't know if you are stupid or ignorant maybe both. Read my comment again and understand it. That's why i said people like u exist. To stupid to realize something in front. And why do you compare dish that have been spit what with this metaphor. How long have you been in this webnovel platform are you dumb or something is the lvl 6 all for nothing. I never said u cant critique the author but be moderate and respectful. It's the fruit of other people hard work.

Unironically tying in virtual level of WN to person's worth and experience? You are such a beautiful mistake of a human being that I don't even know where to start. Please carry on with your retarded crying, witnessing such pure unadulterated idiocy makes me hot and bothered down there.

Mad bruh 😂😂😂 let me quote you this. " One cannot win an argument with a stupid person". And the stupid person here is you. After this I'm not gonna care what u wanna say so out with it and let it be done. You win congratulations.

Ah yes, the "making a random quote in a futile attempt to look smart and running away while crying" defense. I see you are a member of the revered Kindergarten Sect, how orthodox of you.

You are such a retard...

Lol that was a critical hit.

Bruh I drop this retarded **** after he gives syr to bell like nothing. At first I was try my hardest to read it but no after author decided to give bell a harem and mc babysit him is not my cup of tea. The mc is super ****||y this mc has no character development at all. Considering his past life he doesn't act like what he went through instead he acts chummy with a person he literally met for first time yeah I am talking about bell. Reading it will just waste your time. It's better to read the original light novel.

Hey if you read till 48 chapters can you tell me mc current harem...? Also is ais in harem or not...?

From my meagre understanding, no she's not, he's her father reincarnation, I might be wrong though, that part was confusing and I'm not care enough to reread it lol.

I don't understand this author he is writing a danmachi fan-fic but he gives all the best girls to bell . This author has some serious brain issue.

well, tbh I like Ryuu more than Ais, but I agree with the author spoiling Bell too much, he should just make Bell the MC.

I also like ryuu but still bell got best girls . And author gives mc a pros-titute which was ****ed by a lot of men's yeah I am talking about aisha. Ps I haven't read after chapter 6 I just saw that aisha was part of mc harem and aisha was prostitute working for ishger .

From where it's going, he's going to get Ishtar too, in the future he might also get Phryne for all we know lol

Well I think he deserves phryne and all prostitute type of women's. After seeing aisha in the harem I think he doesn't deserve ryuu I think author should also give ryuu to bell. This mc deserves all second hand women's like the author. And bell should get all 1st rated girls well that's how he has written till now.

Hmm... I don't know that the conversation going to get this long :3. I won't argue much but sure. thanks for reading or maybe kept reading, I only did this in my free time. After all, I'm not getting paid or anything. But if you said that I give the woman, Let's say, Syr or maybe Ais. I don't even own them in the first place as MC's perspective. And for babysitting Bell, I'm sorry to say but I will keep writing it like that since for me. That's how older brother should be. Thank you, I'm just sharing my thought and not lecturing you :3

I dropped this at chapter 51, can't believe people are still reading this.