Mediocre. The concept was interesting. But the execution was very bad. MC is pathetic and un-likable. The characters are not developed at all. World-building is sub-par at best. The main flaw is the MC. He does not have any intelligence at all. And only survived till now due to plot armor. His behaviour is like a child who found a new toy.
Pig That Can Howl Like A Wolf
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giốngShin_Senpai:I am bored. *Goes to a comment section of random novel on WN* Ah, the drama. I am entertained.
First of all this ain't my novel, because my novel is a pure s*hit and I know it, you can check my account to as a prove, second of all mind your own FVCING business, my point was if you don't like the novel DON'T fvcking read it, stop reading in that point, you don't need to be an as*hol about it, if you're gonna write a review at least make it useful like a warning about Ntr or pure stupidity done by the mc with telling the details of when and witch chapter the deed was done.
yeonheeblue:Seems like someone is upset that OP didn’t like their novel.
Supreme_Devil:First of all this ain't my novel, because my novel is a pure s*hit and I know it, you can check my account to as a prove, second of all mind your own FVCING business, my point was if you don't like the novel DON'T fvcking read it, stop reading in that point, you don't need to be an as*hol about it, if you're gonna write a review at least make it useful like a warning about Ntr or pure stupidity done by the mc with telling the details of when and witch chapter the deed was done.
Awe did I make the little baby mad, I have a pacifier for you so don’t cry. Haha I am having fun are you? I love people like you since it’s so fun to tease and such. Want me to sing a lullaby for the little baby and warm up some milk in a bottle?
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Awe speaking of my mother that’s a no no little crybaby. Did your mommy not let you suckle on her teat? Is that why you’re so upset? Don’t worry I hear you can buy artificial ones so you can accomplish what you couldn’t do when young. This is fun making fun of you since you’re so mad at the little stuff haha, I wonder how you manage in the real world?
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Am I supposed to care? You won’t find any sympathy here haha. Still have a mother since it’s not like you magically appeared on Earth. I’m looking forward to your next reply since it’s fun haha. Continue to make me have a laugh if you would be so kind.
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Oh yes because what I say on the internet does equate to how I am in reality haha. I’m surprised your dumb self replied this long haha, poor little soul ran out of petty comebacks. This little incident will teach you to not be toxic and tell others to shut up and such when they give their own opinion about a novel. If not then you’ll get roasted some more haha.
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Mind his fucking business? In that case, you should 'mind your fucking business' and not be negative towards the review. Is the baby mad that he's not teething?
Supreme_Devil:First of all this ain't my novel, because my novel is a pure s*hit and I know it, you can check my account to as a prove, second of all mind your own FVCING business, my point was if you don't like the novel DON'T fvcking read it, stop reading in that point, you don't need to be an as*hol about it, if you're gonna write a review at least make it useful like a warning about Ntr or pure stupidity done by the mc with telling the details of when and witch chapter the deed was done.
Mind his fucking business? In that case, you should 'mind your fucking business' and not be negative towards the review. Is the baby mad that he's not teething?
Supreme_Devil:First of all this ain't my novel, because my novel is a pure s*hit and I know it, you can check my account to as a prove, second of all mind your own FVCING business, my point was if you don't like the novel DON'T fvcking read it, stop reading in that point, you don't need to be an as*hol about it, if you're gonna write a review at least make it useful like a warning about Ntr or pure stupidity done by the mc with telling the details of when and witch chapter the deed was done.
FilledWithHope:Mind his fucking business? In that case, you should 'mind your fucking business' and not be negative towards the review. Is the baby mad that he's not teething?
yeonheeblue:Awe did I make the little baby mad, I have a pacifier for you so don’t cry. Haha I am having fun are you? I love people like you since it’s so fun to tease and such. Want me to sing a lullaby for the little baby and warm up some milk in a bottle?
yeonheeblue:Am I supposed to care? You won’t find any sympathy here haha. Still have a mother since it’s not like you magically appeared on Earth. I’m looking forward to your next reply since it’s fun haha. Continue to make me have a laugh if you would be so kind.
yeonheeblue:Oh yes because what I say on the internet does equate to how I am in reality haha. I’m surprised your dumb self replied this long haha, poor little soul ran out of petty comebacks. This little incident will teach you to not be toxic and tell others to shut up and such when they give their own opinion about a novel. If not then you’ll get roasted some more haha.
Supreme_Devil:First of all this ain't my novel, because my novel is a pure s*hit and I know it, you can check my account to as a prove, second of all mind your own FVCING business, my point was if you don't like the novel DON'T fvcking read it, stop reading in that point, you don't need to be an as*hol about it, if you're gonna write a review at least make it useful like a warning about Ntr or pure stupidity done by the mc with telling the details of when and witch chapter the deed was done.
And you're a kid because you're going in their kid conversation to provokes them even more. And i'm even more of a kid to say that to you since it's a fucking eternal loop now.
Om_Patel_4281:Your really toxic too.