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The initial chapters made me fall in love with the work. But the troupe of his hand being injured and making him get nerfed, made me irritated. If you were going to do weak to strong I’d rather the story start with the Mc being weak initially and then becoming strong instead of what we got. I will stop reading and let more chapters fill up, and maybe there will be a small chance of me liking this story again. So good luck and I hope you are able to make me invested in the story again.

I really loved this fanfic but the current arc has been disappointing. Every chapter in this arc were some of my least favorites. We barley saw any fights until their ending. The last chapter especially, was the worst one the author has made. So many unnecessary deaths, a lot of the story developments in that chapter felt forced. I will see where it goes and if it becomes better I will change my rating.

So you rated this novel so low because of the author’s update schedule and not the actual story. The whole point of reviews are to explain what you think of the story.

Explain

Everything has a 4 or a 5 star from me but story development and charachter design. I love stories that have the mc working through his personal problems, and becoming stronger due to it. However, this story is a continuous story of the mc getting depression, getting help, then something else happens for him to be more depressed. The whole story is just a cycle of depression the mc deals with and it starts to feel boring.

You seem like a person who only likes characters that are emotionless, and have no realistic factors. If you like that, then just read wish fulfillment, and stop wasting time by commenting with your horrible English.

You live in a world where people can be murdered, but until you see it for yourself you do not understand how much danger you can be in. Icarus knew how powerful the gods are but seeing it for himself made him fear it more.

Yeah, I guess he forgot the whole Camelot incident.

If you have no criticism or positivity you sholdn’t review at all.

I love this fanfic. I binged the whole story after reading the first chapter.