Item: The Ancestor
Rating: 3.6

yuhyeenieLv46yr

2018-05-27 11:04

Im really sorry... I don't really understand what you are trying to narrate in your story. You should also at least put a proper sypnosis to give us, the readers, a clue about what are you trying to tell or narrate:) There are some grammatical errors within your writing but im sure you can fix them later on...

The Ancestor

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